01-28-2016, 09:20 PM
I suppose you would have to say this is a striking piece of writing – using vulgarity to grab attention.
Unfortunately, for me, much of it makes little sense. I suppose the first line says you are a creation of God due to the tree in the garden of Eden. I do get one or two quite clever links – busted flush in its two meanings for example and I think there is deliberate humour in the last line.
I must say that, for me, the string of insults do not really create an emotion within me.
Unfortunately, for me, much of it makes little sense. I suppose the first line says you are a creation of God due to the tree in the garden of Eden. I do get one or two quite clever links – busted flush in its two meanings for example and I think there is deliberate humour in the last line.
I must say that, for me, the string of insults do not really create an emotion within me.