Thou.

Thou.

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01-28-2016, 05:36 PM

I'm a complete novice.
I really like the busted flush, but the card-table then lav made it too far apart for me to notice at first. That stanza needs working around a bit, I reckon.
Thought you carried the theme through well and I'm left thinking about bodily fluids & economics
Thanks Smile

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Thou. - by Icon Zero - 01-27-2016, 04:00 PM

RE: Thou. - by just mercedes - 01-27-2016, 04:31 PM

RE: Thou. - by blanc - 01-28-2016, 06:30 AM

RE: Thou. - by aschueler - 01-28-2016, 10:02 AM

RE: Thou. - by QDeathstar - 01-28-2016, 01:53 PM

RE: Thou. - by Icon Zero - 01-28-2016, 02:27 PM

RE: Thou. - by UselessBlueprint - 01-28-2016, 04:06 PM

RE: Thou. - by Frankee_thecat - 01-28-2016, 05:36 PM

RE: Thou. - by Julius - 01-28-2016, 09:20 PM

RE: Thou. - by QDeathstar - 01-29-2016, 04:42 AM

RE: Thou. - by RiverNotch - 01-29-2016, 03:35 PM

RE: Thou. - by Icon Zero - 03-01-2016, 02:27 PM

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