01-28-2016, 04:16 PM
The lack of line breaks made this a little intimidating. And just to be an echo here, making up words is not a problem if done with purpose. In studying Latin poetry, I often encountered words that were made up by the poet, which are been called neologisms. In personal nit-picking, I don't like the capitalization of "the Poet tree." For mechanics, some of the long lines are justified, but for sections like lines 6-8, I don't see the purpose in formatting yet.
If you're the smartest person in the room, you're in the wrong room.
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona
"Or, if a poet writes a poem, then immediately commits suicide (as any decent poet should)..." -- Erthona