The Poet Tree

[QDeathstar]

I think that creating words is fine, especially when it is clear what you mean, which in this case, we are. The poem has nice rythm, which I can appreciate. However, poems are about, in my opinion, making each word impactful. You've got a lot of words that do not add significant meaning to the peice. Half of the poem is conjunctions and pronouns.... how many times do you really need the word the?

this line:
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To see if there is an ending, to the wonder of ascending

is my least favorite of the poem.... it is extremely awkward to the point of being hard to read, which was done for meter and rhyme, but meh.