Thou.

[aschueler]

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I feel it needs more adding to it, but this is the first draft I guess.

           Thou.

Thou art the bastard of the apple,This line seems to lack meaning
Seedlings of the God bollock, This as well
Farts from the steam whistle,
Reminding you to forget. This hints at intrigue but then drifts away

Thou art a busted flush,
Of the card table,
Of the lavatory,
The house has your money,
But you get to keep the turd. Crude but clarifies

Thou art junk food,
Your mind is Kentucky-Fried,  if you use thou, Thy should follow
Your soul is flame-grilled,
Your flesh is a stuffed crust,
And your nuts are dry-roasted.  Ends weak, reminds of the the joke "quick show her you're nuts"

It is filled with potential, and you clearly have something to say to someone.  Future drafts will help clarify.