The Poet Tree
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Making up new words is allowed in my book. I like that you brought in the idea of growth and beginning through a metaphorical tree. It seems you are inspired by nature, and use it as a tool to better define concepts in your mind. There is a preciousness about nature, and new birth, that showed me how much you treasure this art form in a way. The use of it in the beginning made the topic of the poem a bit of a mystery at first, but perhaps you wanted it to be that way. Good work, would love to see more in the future.
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The Poet Tree - by LukeSizemore - 01-28-2016, 12:34 AM
RE: The Poet Tree - by rowens - 01-28-2016, 01:33 AM
RE: The Poet Tree - by LukeSizemore - 01-28-2016, 02:06 AM
RE: The Poet Tree - by blanc - 01-28-2016, 04:21 AM
RE: The Poet Tree - by QDeathstar - 01-28-2016, 02:03 PM
RE: The Poet Tree - by UselessBlueprint - 01-28-2016, 04:16 PM
RE: The Poet Tree - by LukeSizemore - 01-28-2016, 10:39 PM



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