Campus cold: Edit 2
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I thought it was one of those short poems, but it's not in that section. Each sentence connects with the next under the light of the title, but in no other way. The last line has the most interesting phrase, laughter was the currency of youth. Your meaning is implied, but so briefly, it feels like a longer or different version of the poem could expand that final phrase.
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Campus cold: Edit 2 - by BW BRINE - 01-22-2016, 03:53 AM
RE: Campus cold - by rowens - 01-22-2016, 04:35 AM
RE: Campus cold - by Achebe - 01-22-2016, 06:45 AM
RE: Campus cold - by kkieran - 01-22-2016, 07:40 AM
RE: Campus cold - by Julius - 01-23-2016, 05:51 AM
RE: Campus cold - by BW BRINE - 01-27-2016, 06:49 AM
RE: Campus cold - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 01-27-2016, 11:39 AM
RE: Campus cold - by slecht - 02-01-2016, 10:44 AM
RE: Campus cold - by BW BRINE - 02-04-2016, 01:57 AM
RE: Campus cold - by Erthona - 02-04-2016, 02:35 AM
RE: Campus cold - by BW BRINE - 02-04-2016, 08:28 AM
RE: Campus cold - by Erthona - 02-04-2016, 11:34 AM



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