01-16-2016, 12:45 PM
Keith,
This is excellent, I read it as a blues poem or a kind of new-age field holler.
I especially like 'as I work away fretless' and the mention of 'pentatonic'.
I would have probably been tempted to use some more guitar terms in there, but that's where I would have spoilt it. 'Plucking' probably seems a bit too obvious and I can see how it would mess up the title also.
Are you thinking of putting this to music? It has a 'slide guitar' feel written all over it in many senses.
Cheers for the read,
Mark
This is excellent, I read it as a blues poem or a kind of new-age field holler.
I especially like 'as I work away fretless' and the mention of 'pentatonic'.
I would have probably been tempted to use some more guitar terms in there, but that's where I would have spoilt it. 'Plucking' probably seems a bit too obvious and I can see how it would mess up the title also.
Are you thinking of putting this to music? It has a 'slide guitar' feel written all over it in many senses.
Cheers for the read,
Mark
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