Anxiety

[billy]

hi mlund.

the things we do to stay sane.

i like the idea but the execution of the thought feels to easy [weak] play around with it and make the reader think a bit. an example;

when i feel
alone i remove myself

try and give the reader something solid; what are you feeling? use metaphor or simile

Sometimes I feel so lonely that I have to
Remove myself
To solitude,
So that for once what I am feeling
Is not all in my head