Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas)
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Hi Dale,

I think that works a lot better. Now I instantly get that Southern accent going from the very beginning. I'm hoping to find time to give this a thorough read over the weekend so I can give you a more detailed critique!
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RE: Beat - by tomoffing - 01-07-2016, 08:44 PM
RE: Beat - by Erthona - 01-08-2016, 05:11 AM
RE: Beat - by Apache - 01-08-2016, 08:09 AM
RE: Beat - by Erthona - 01-08-2016, 11:30 AM
RE: Beat - by Apache - 01-08-2016, 10:46 PM
RE: Beat - by Erthona - 01-08-2016, 11:34 PM
RE: Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by Apache - 01-09-2016, 05:06 AM
RE: Beat (rev 1 Apache, header change , added Austin Texas) - by just mercedes - 01-09-2016, 05:35 AM



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