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because the world can do without

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01-05-2016, 10:55 PM

I like the simile that finishes the first stanza the most Smile

im curious where you're from? Noticed you spelled colour but not neighbourhood Tongue

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RE: because the world can do without - by Weeded - 01-05-2016, 10:55 PM

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