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a night and a day
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01-03-2016, 08:33 AM
My honest opinion is that the first long stanza about breasts and sunsets is a little cringe and does nothing to evoke understanding of the subject matter. The second and final stanza I think actually works as a complete poem. It flows beautifully and awkwardly and produces powerful imagery. It says everything the first stanza describes but fails to reveal.
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a night and a day - by skadragon - 10-01-2015, 04:28 AM
RE: a night and a day - by rowens - 10-02-2015, 08:59 AM
RE: a night and a day - by hannah.h - 10-02-2015, 04:52 PM
RE: a night and a day - by aleexgold - 10-31-2015, 04:47 AM
RE: a night and a day - by skadragon - 12-01-2015, 03:33 PM
RE: a night and a day - by enigmaticexistence - 12-14-2015, 03:43 PM
RE: a night and a day - by MAE27 - 01-03-2016, 08:33 AM
RE: a night and a day - by REW - 01-03-2016, 12:04 PM
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