12-12-2015, 04:59 AM
(12-11-2015, 12:01 PM)billy Wrote: the form in you is strong young wonkywalkerUm teach me you will
the couplet works though if you want a suggestion, it would be to
alter [still wants to hang around] it feels a little out of kilter with the language at use in the sonnet.
made edits I have
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out