A walk among the tombstones

[samyarb]

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it had a great flow. I like the overall theme of the poem, and the description of place/time of day. However there were quite a few cliches such as "look upon a star", "long for your embrace", "heart begins to race', etc. Also, I think you should re-think this line: " From sight, I now have lost you,that thought renders me scared." It just doesn't sound right.