11-30-2015, 11:05 PM
I'm with Qdeath here...why not replace the weak 'Let me' with the 'Will you let...' of the original? More restless, more angsty.
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Can I Please Love You? REVISION
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Can I Please Love You? REVISION - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 06-10-2015, 11:38 AM
RE: Can I Please Love You? REVISION - by QDeathstar - 06-10-2015, 11:56 AM
RE: Can I Please Love You? REVISION - by nightKnight - 06-29-2015, 08:16 AM
RE: Can I Please Love You? REVISION - by xyroph - 11-30-2015, 06:37 PM
RE: Can I Please Love You? REVISION - by DeakinDeakin - 11-30-2015, 07:28 PM
RE: Can I Please Love You? REVISION - by Achebe - 11-30-2015, 11:05 PM
RE: Can I Please Love You? REVISION - by ThatsNotFennel - 12-02-2015, 05:29 AM
RE: Can I Please Love You? REVISION - by samyarb - 12-03-2015, 02:00 PM
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