How Are You?

[Kubla Khan]

Yesterday at 4 (15:57),
I told you I was doing ok
(I don't know what's wrong anymore)
and that I was 6 months clean
(from some things)
but I didn't remember the exact date
(whole months are still a blur).
You asked about my eating
("So...What about...You know...")
and I told you I was better
(I only skip some meals)
The whole conversation was short
(157 seconds)
but I'm already thinking of responses for today.
(Are you going to ask me how I am?)

Hi. I like this poem. Unexpectedly novel.
As was mentioned before, italicizing the lines within parenthesis might be something to explore.
And I feel line 3 could be altered somehow, even completely replaced with something else and line 9 could be removed. But that is your call.