11-10-2015, 12:31 PM
I do like this one, "a beast burdened with survival" was a good use of words and great interpretation 
I like how you used the ark as a boat reference and shows it from different perspectives like the sea beasts and sailors
but i really like the phrase you used "a beast burdened with survival"
Great job!
Next time try to make it go together even in the start it makes no sense, try to make it make sense in the end atleast but still great job !
I like how you used the ark as a boat reference and shows it from different perspectives like the sea beasts and sailors
but i really like the phrase you used "a beast burdened with survival"
Great job!
Next time try to make it go together even in the start it makes no sense, try to make it make sense in the end atleast but still great job !