11-06-2015, 10:39 PM
IMO you have a kernel of something really good here, but descend from the heights too early.
The kernel is, as you can guess:
No young men live for childhood here,
but for the fire that burns them back ----------------- Btw "Back" suggests that they came from virgin wombs in the first place, but they're not Jesus / Horus.
into the wombs of virgins.
The kernel is, as you can guess:
No young men live for childhood here,
but for the fire that burns them back ----------------- Btw "Back" suggests that they came from virgin wombs in the first place, but they're not Jesus / Horus.
into the wombs of virgins.