Lovers no more

[the man with the spoon]

Misstruths and fabricated feelings
Actions betraying words spoken
False sentiment and hollow truths
Promises made to be broken

Incomplete love bitter sweet
Betrayal tasting sour
Time lapses as does judgement
Reckoning upon the hour

Ill will and discontent
Never to be satisfied
Scornful bruises battered and torn
Joyous feelings ratified        

Time marches forward
Footsteps heavy in the dirt
Unrelenting and unforgiving
Not stopping if you're hurt      

Lessons in life
Twisted and cruel
Summer always breaks
For winters' renewal

i wasnt the biggest fan of the ending, i really like the last verse, but the last line kind of through me, why "For winters' renewal"? why not "with winters' renewal" , using for makes it seem like your on winters side. also if you are gonna talk about winter at the end try to fore shadow it in the line "Footsteps heavy in the dirt" maybe say "footsteps heavy in the snow" or even switch some words around like "footsteps in heavy snow" making it seem like your getting stuck in this past, or moment in time. really liked the story however, easy to relate.