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The Void At My Side
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10-29-2015, 03:44 AM
I was attempting to write in the vignette style and was more concerned with sound and feeling as well as the use of repetition with a bit of alliteration. Are you suggesting a mere reformat? I appreciate the feedback but I fear I may be missing what exactly your suggestions are.
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The Void At My Side - by love apollon - 10-28-2015, 11:44 AM
RE: The Void At My Side - by tectak - 10-28-2015, 05:52 PM
RE: The Void At My Side - by love apollon - 10-29-2015, 03:44 AM
RE: The Void At My Side - by tectak - 10-29-2015, 07:08 AM
RE: The Void At My Side - by milo - 10-29-2015, 09:05 AM
RE: The Void At My Side - by love apollon - 10-29-2015, 02:27 PM
RE: The Void At My Side - by milo - 10-29-2015, 10:48 PM
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