Cardboard Hill
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Thanks for your thoughts JM, I agree with everything, except for maybe "testing it out", which I might want to keep.


I'll make the other changes now, and think on that one.

I adapted this poem from a conversation I read on a Facebook group for the neighbourhood I grew up in. Basically all the details were in there; I might start lurking other neighbourhood facebook groups to steal some more ideas.
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Cardboard Hill - by Wjames - 10-13-2015, 02:35 PM
RE: Cardboard Hill - by just mercedes - 10-13-2015, 02:47 PM
RE: Cardboard Hill - by Wjames - 10-13-2015, 03:10 PM
RE: Cardboard Hill - by RiverNotch - 10-13-2015, 10:47 PM
RE: Cardboard Hill - by love apollon - 10-24-2015, 01:58 AM
RE: Cardboard Hill - by Wjames - 11-11-2015, 07:47 AM



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