My Dream Girl
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The Line:
http://pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=4281

This one is on line length, it's sort of butchered due to a self-deletion frenzy but you can follow it through the quotes, and I love this one.
http://www.pigpenpoetry.com/showthread.php?tid=11672

This post had the biggest effect on me:
(10-26-2013, 11:57 PM)milo Wrote:  Someone told me once that you should have every line break point to the central metaphor. I kind of dismissed it at the time as impossible but I think now that ideally this is true.
Oh, and there's a link on the right side of our home page to Colin Ward's Poetry Tips,  if you haven't read it give it a go, a fun and informative read.
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Messages In This Thread
My Dream Girl - by Weeded - 10-09-2015, 08:41 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by ellajam - 10-09-2015, 08:55 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by milo - 10-09-2015, 08:59 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by Weeded - 10-09-2015, 09:00 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by milo - 10-09-2015, 09:07 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by justlikeyou - 10-09-2015, 09:09 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by Weeded - 10-09-2015, 09:13 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by ellajam - 10-09-2015, 10:01 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by Weeded - 10-09-2015, 10:12 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by Stateofmind - 10-11-2015, 11:59 AM
RE: My Dream Girl - by Weeded - 10-11-2015, 07:15 PM
RE: My Dream Girl - by 2abi100 - 11-10-2015, 12:43 PM



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