No One Thing Is Enough

[Keith]

 
 
                   No One Thing Is Enough
 
 
No one thing is enough,
I said,
and left true love crying
in misunderstanding,
as if it was not made of many things;
 
and coming back, finding it
still there
but no longer warm,
 
I kept my shoes on for a night,
and later the next evening
went out on my own to try to find help.
 
Which only made it worse.
 


 

Hi Rowens
As always I find your poetry interesting because it makes me think of other things, tangents. This one comes across as those moments of madness after a break up, really like the shoes on line, its says a lot without being obvious....talking of obvious I am going to say the true love line takes away from rest, by just being bland. I would suggest that you find another way to say it, could I also suggest you chose another title, to avoid the repeated first line. I enjoyed this one and I think its worth the extra, just to tidy up. Best Keith