09-30-2015, 09:32 AM
Sounds good Rowens, and Thanks Ella 
Mark,
Yes this poem seems like it belongs more in the "For Fun" section after waking up and rereading itĀ
I don't mind a proper critique, but I probably won't be doing any editing on this one. It served it's purpose: putting me to sleepĀ

Mark,
Yes this poem seems like it belongs more in the "For Fun" section after waking up and rereading itĀ
I don't mind a proper critique, but I probably won't be doing any editing on this one. It served it's purpose: putting me to sleepĀ

