09-24-2015, 09:31 PM
OMG ! It's a poem ! Thank You ! I enjoyed being in it's company. She's a fine bit of writing that didn't pull my leg anywhere nor stumble over herself at any point, nor did she embarrass the writer & took the reader seriously every step of the way - every line nailed down tight with certainty & a straight bead. It engages mind & emotion almost immediately & holds them to the finish line. It's real target is the heart and it does not miss.
I enjoyed the whole satisfying journey beginning to end but I do have a favorite line and it's a sparkler -
" The whole conversation was short
( 157 seconds )"
f**k**g *brilliant* - - - 3zu
I enjoyed the whole satisfying journey beginning to end but I do have a favorite line and it's a sparkler -
" The whole conversation was short
( 157 seconds )"
f**k**g *brilliant* - - - 3zu