How Are You?
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Hi, how are you?  I was trying to do a critique  of your poem and thinking that the lines in parenthesis needed to stand out, maybe using italics. I've just read Jason's review, and he suggested indenting, which sounds good.

I like the freshness of this.  Thanks for the read. Grace
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How Are You? - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 09-13-2015, 02:30 PM
RE: How Are You? - by Grace - 09-15-2015, 11:33 AM
RE: How Are You? - by 3zu - 09-24-2015, 09:31 PM
RE: How Are You? - by SnarlingThroughOurSmiles - 11-02-2015, 06:11 PM
RE: How Are You? - by Kubla Khan - 11-20-2015, 05:06 AM



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