Making History
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(09-12-2015, 09:51 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  Making History

September 11 is moving closer
and closer to becoming
just another answer
on a history test.
Well poop, it's the twelfth here. Might I suggest removing "and closer", just to make it more, er, universal, in terms of time? other than that, this is--well, since I'm not from there, and I was too young when it happened, I suppose, in a sense, it's already just another answer on a history test to me, but still--just--well--oh, you know.
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Making History - by Mark A Becker - 09-12-2015, 09:51 AM
RE: Making History - by rayheinrich - 09-12-2015, 02:53 PM
RE: Making History - by RiverNotch - 09-12-2015, 03:08 PM
RE: Making History - by Mark A Becker - 09-12-2015, 10:48 PM
RE: Making History - by rayheinrich - 09-13-2015, 08:21 AM
RE: Making History - by Mark A Becker - 09-13-2015, 09:43 AM
RE: Making History - by just mercedes - 09-13-2015, 11:09 AM
RE: Making History - by rayheinrich - 09-13-2015, 11:30 AM
RE: Making History - by Mark A Becker - 09-15-2015, 10:17 AM
RE: Making History - by rayheinrich - 09-15-2015, 07:23 PM
RE: Making History - by Mark A Becker - 09-15-2015, 11:03 PM



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