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09-02-2015, 05:32 PM

wouldn't change a thing but ...would add an dash [-] after doorstep which would make seeing andromeda stand out with a bit of awe.

(09-02-2015, 02:00 PM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: from my doorstep
I can see
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Bad Eyesight? - by Magpie - 09-02-2015, 02:00 PM

RE: Bad Eyesight? - by just mercedes - 09-02-2015, 03:53 PM

RE: Bad Eyesight? - by Magpie - 09-02-2015, 04:44 PM

RE: Bad Eyesight? - by billy - 09-02-2015, 05:32 PM

RE: Bad Eyesight? - by Magpie - 09-02-2015, 09:07 PM

RE: Bad Eyesight? - by Mark A Becker - 09-11-2015, 12:53 AM

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