08-25-2015, 10:35 AM
Hello JennSmith61_
Time has stopped moving,
it's left only you.
Circling me,
consuming me,
abusing me.
Put your chest against my back,
the way you used to. always 1:43, so this has happened before, eh?
I want to slow our hearts to the same speed.
Only for a minute,
it's all the time I need,
so I can remember the synchronized beating.HUH?
Scream in my face,with chest against your back, how can this person scream in yer face?
so I know you feel something.
Shake me if I'm day dreaming,
I may just be numb.
Love me,odd for this to follow "abusing me" from the first stanza
lose me,
hate me,
and remind me again which one of us won.won what?
I can't get my head around what is going on in this piece. The best I can get is that traumatic experience has "stopped time" and that the scene keeps playing over and over again. That said, the ending is very confusing...
... Mark
Time has stopped moving,
it's left only you.
Circling me,
consuming me,
abusing me.
Put your chest against my back,
the way you used to. always 1:43, so this has happened before, eh?
I want to slow our hearts to the same speed.
Only for a minute,
it's all the time I need,
so I can remember the synchronized beating.HUH?
Scream in my face,with chest against your back, how can this person scream in yer face?
so I know you feel something.
Shake me if I'm day dreaming,
I may just be numb.
Love me,odd for this to follow "abusing me" from the first stanza
lose me,
hate me,
and remind me again which one of us won.won what?
I can't get my head around what is going on in this piece. The best I can get is that traumatic experience has "stopped time" and that the scene keeps playing over and over again. That said, the ending is very confusing...
... Mark