08-25-2015, 01:47 AM
1:43,
it's always 1:43.
Time has stopped moving,
it's left only you.
Circling me,
consuming me,
abusing me.
Put your chest against my back,
the way you used to.
I want to slow our hearts to the same speed.
Only for a minute,
it's all the time I need,
so I can remember the synchronized beating.
Scream in my face,
so I know you feel something.
Shake me if I'm day dreaming,
I may just be numb.
Love me,
lose me,
hate me,
and remind me again which one of us won.
Looking forward to getting some constructive feedback, especially around punctuation and flow.
it's always 1:43.
Time has stopped moving,
it's left only you.
Circling me,
consuming me,
abusing me.
Put your chest against my back,
the way you used to.
I want to slow our hearts to the same speed.
Only for a minute,
it's all the time I need,
so I can remember the synchronized beating.
Scream in my face,
so I know you feel something.
Shake me if I'm day dreaming,
I may just be numb.
Love me,
lose me,
hate me,
and remind me again which one of us won.
Looking forward to getting some constructive feedback, especially around punctuation and flow.