Routes and Regrets

Routes and Regrets

HardScotch
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08-19-2015, 11:53 AM

Ok i gave it like 10 reads over and over. I enjoyed the poem, i really did. I cant find any way to critique it, probably cause i think its well done. The only thing i can think of is maybe try combining a few of your stanza's, I dont think it needs to be 9 long. maybe 5, or 6.

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