Routes and Regrets

Routes and Regrets

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08-19-2015, 11:10 AM

I enjoyed the poem very much. But may I suggest instead of "he puts down the gas", he "steps off the gas"? i.e. the gas pedal? Unless I am misinterpreting that.

But Lancelot mused a little space; He said, "She has a lovely face; God in his mercy lend her grace"

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Pile Up - by Bunx - 08-16-2015, 04:02 AM

RE: Routes and Regrets - by Bunx - 08-19-2024, 06:08 AM

RE: Pile Up - by Bunx - 08-17-2015, 11:08 PM

RE: Pile Up - by John - 08-18-2015, 04:19 AM

RE: Pile Up - by peacejazzspirit - 08-18-2015, 12:18 PM

RE: Pile Up - by joesammsington - 08-19-2015, 11:10 AM

RE: Pile Up - by HardScotch - 08-19-2015, 11:53 AM

RE: Pile Up - by BrokenSoul - 08-22-2015, 01:20 AM

RE: Pile Up - by Bunx - 08-22-2015, 01:57 AM

RE: Pile Up - by QDeathstar - 08-25-2015, 12:41 AM

Routes and Regrets - by Bunx - 08-15-2024, 04:15 AM

RE: Routes and Regrets - by SpruceMoose - 08-17-2024, 11:00 PM

RE: Routes and Regrets - by Bunx - 08-18-2024, 07:15 AM

RE: Routes and Regrets - by Quixilated - 08-18-2024, 10:49 AM

RE: Routes and Regrets - by Bunx - 08-18-2024, 11:04 AM

RE: Routes and Regrets - by Quixilated - 08-18-2024, 11:11 AM

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