Ode to Food Porn Edit 1 Thank You For Comments
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Ode to Food Porn Edit 1 Thank You For Comments
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08-12-2015, 08:19 PM
You got my attention by using the word "Porn" in your title. However, your poem reads more like the words of some of Jim Morrison's (The Doors singer) poems. It left an oily slick on my lips by the time I had finished like I had just finished eating at The Greasy Spoon on Route 66. Not even the word "nipples" could arouse me after reading the previous 41 stanzas. I think the only thing that needs changing is the title.
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Ode to Food Porn Edit 1 Thank You For Comments - by Brownlie - 07-30-2015, 01:35 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn - by John - 07-30-2015, 02:27 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn - by NobodyNothing - 07-30-2015, 02:31 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn - by peacejazzspirit - 07-30-2015, 02:58 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn - by Magpie - 07-30-2015, 04:50 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn - by Brownlie - 07-31-2015, 02:25 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn - by billy - 07-31-2015, 05:12 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn - by Brownlie - 07-31-2015, 10:41 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn - by NobodyNothing - 08-01-2015, 10:45 AM
RE: Ode to Food Porn Edit 1 Thank You For Comments - by Brownlie - 08-05-2015, 04:11 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn Edit 1 Thank You For Comments - by velvet_morph - 08-12-2015, 08:19 PM
RE: Ode to Food Porn Edit 1 Thank You For Comments - by Brownlie - 08-13-2015, 05:52 AM
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