08-09-2015, 09:32 AM
(08-09-2015, 08:56 AM)rayheinrich Wrote: Inserting old movie clichés into a poem, even when intended asTotally missed your reference, sorry. If it's an old movie cliche, it's not from any old movies I've seen. Perhaps the idea of vision as literal eyes, discarded on the floor, requires clarification. What movie is that from? Something Texican?
homage or oblong irony, is pretty lame dude.
It could be worse
