Love is like a flower

[tectak]

I don't know what you're going on about with the second quatrain. It was free of grammatical errors and the syntax looked fine to me. Also, one does, in fact, reminisce of things. You could say "about", but it doesn't quite roll off the tongue.

Yes...I agree. You DON'T know what I am going on about...but you will now feel very silly when I correct your use of the word "reminisce". It is "reminiscent OF" but one "reminisces ABOUT".
Best,
tectak