08-06-2015, 11:49 AM
I feel like this is so close to kitsch it makes me uncomfortable. You have some good lines in here though, but the topic is hard to make your own.
[and will not make you pancakes.
***
I tell you I love you,
like I show you a scar.]
Maybe build on this. I would show a scar as though I'm proud of it, but I don't know if that's what you mean, and I like that I don't know. But expand.
[and will not make you pancakes.
***
I tell you I love you,
like I show you a scar.]
Maybe build on this. I would show a scar as though I'm proud of it, but I don't know if that's what you mean, and I like that I don't know. But expand.
I'll be there in a minute.