Death's Gift (changed from Rich)

Death's Gift (changed from Rich)

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08-06-2015, 02:43 AM

Thanks for the comments. I'm realizing now that many of my "poems" are actually just prose with line breaks. With your critiques and a little clarification on what poetry actually is, I've posted my first edit.

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Death's Gift (changed from Rich) - by Turtle - 08-04-2015, 03:48 PM

RE: Rich - by Mark A Becker - 08-05-2015, 07:01 AM

RE: Rich - by billy - 08-05-2015, 06:05 PM

RE: Death's Lesson (changed from Rich) - by Turtle - 08-06-2015, 02:43 AM

RE: Death's Gift (changed from Rich) - by Quixilated - 08-06-2015, 07:43 AM

RE: Death's Gift (changed from Rich) - by summermoose - 08-06-2015, 08:20 AM

RE: Death's Gift (changed from Rich) - by Animal Riots Activist - 08-06-2015, 01:23 PM

RE: Death's Gift (changed from Rich) - by fluorescent.43 - 08-08-2015, 10:16 AM

RE: Death's Gift (changed from Rich) - by kakashi1090 - 08-09-2015, 01:57 AM

RE: Death's Gift (changed from Rich) - by Cousin Kil - 08-09-2015, 06:39 AM

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