The Prophet

[Leanne]

Thanks folks. Line breaks are easy to fix. Personally I don't always like complete phrases on complete lines, but two views in opposition is near enough to consensus for change.

Turtle, the princess was always Dido, I just named her because I thought maybe people needed Googling help. She was a princess when she fled her brother and got hold of her oxhide -- the isoperimetric puzzle is a pretty famous one in mathematics.

Also, just a heads-up: anyone who's not American won't appreciate you 'correcting' their spelling when it's already correct in pretty much every other English-speaking nation...

Thanks again for very helpful critiques.