The Bottomless Pit - Rev. #1

[Turtle]

I imagined a man trying to sell something on the street, which gets me thinking about my own stereotypes that I have floating around in my head. I really like how you saved the seagulls for the end. The only part that through me off a bit, and that I'd recommend shifting (unless you're going for a particular effect) is the part where you go to a different line between "cream-" and "tea". I think it would flow a little better if you either moved "cream-" down, or "tea" up to the next line. Although there's power in breaking up words/phrases, sometimes flow is more important.