07-30-2015, 02:58 PM
One big metaphor. I'm salivating, too.
Nice personification also: "flesh shots of the chocolate cake", "maraschino nipples dripping cream drops on the malt shop floor."
Nice personification also: "flesh shots of the chocolate cake", "maraschino nipples dripping cream drops on the malt shop floor."
Free verse poetry and jazz are like brother and sister.

