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[Tiger the Lion]

Cider, thank you. I had to use the somewhat cliche last line in order to get the double meaning out of "lit up". I am thinking I could just say "She lit up". But it sounds a little joke-like and loses some of the plot.

Ella, "revealed" indeed sounds nice and is quite accurate. It would actually make a good title but since you're happy with the one I got, I will leave it for now. Thanks.

Paul