Cohort
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Sweet little cameo, made me smile
Has the feel of one of those old one line jokes that 70's comediamn trotted out.
Last line is a cliche but it fits the feel of the poem so no crits.
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Cohort - by Tiger the Lion - 07-17-2015, 03:38 PM
RE: Cohort - by cidermaid - 07-17-2015, 04:37 PM
RE: Cohort - by ellajam - 07-17-2015, 07:46 PM
RE: Cohort - by Tiger the Lion - 07-17-2015, 11:16 PM



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