07-17-2015, 04:37 PM
Sweet little cameo, made me smile
Has the feel of one of those old one line jokes that 70's comediamn trotted out.
Last line is a cliche but it fits the feel of the poem so no crits.
Has the feel of one of those old one line jokes that 70's comediamn trotted out.
Last line is a cliche but it fits the feel of the poem so no crits.

