07-09-2015, 05:58 PM
I have read this twice, and the first question I ask is "where is the rest of it?"
I'm also not unsure that the four lines should not be two longer ones.
This again to me suggests that this is only a fragment of a longer piece.
I do like the last line, very punchy for such a short line.
I'm also not unsure that the four lines should not be two longer ones.
This again to me suggests that this is only a fragment of a longer piece.
I do like the last line, very punchy for such a short line.
I'm slightly mad and completely obsessed with language
Please forgive my spelling and punctuation
Please forgive my spelling and punctuation