Year in Review

[ChristopherSea]

hopeful,

No one writes internet slang with periods after the letters, e.g. L.O.L..

Also, why the ellipsis? What is the implied word or words (internet abbreviation(s) ) that you left out?
You should just include them or alternatively delete them:


Feelings flood, I wish to speak,
instead I simply write
in her yearbook.


This or something like it would stand on its own and work better./Chris