06-16-2015, 06:45 AM
(06-16-2015, 05:57 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: You'll never know how I missed you,
my aim was off I hit your hat.
You'll never know how I missed you,
my next shot made certain of that.
Love it, if you don't want a comma after "off" for simplicity's sake you might need to reword. Thanks for the read, just what I needed.
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