06-10-2015, 11:56 AM
I like the last line of the first version better than the last few lines of the second.
I think that the first stanza of the second version is more effective than the first, and I think the second stanza of the first version is more effective than the second.
I think that the first stanza of the second version is more effective than the first, and I think the second stanza of the first version is more effective than the second.