06-09-2015, 01:13 AM
Observer,
My only thought on this one is that villains don't see themselves as villains. They would not call themselves bullies and tyrants. I don't mind the perspective, but I think to make it better present them as unreliable narrators, heroes in their own minds, but let the poem contradict their position.
Just a thought.
Best,
Todd
My only thought on this one is that villains don't see themselves as villains. They would not call themselves bullies and tyrants. I don't mind the perspective, but I think to make it better present them as unreliable narrators, heroes in their own minds, but let the poem contradict their position.
Just a thought.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson