06-06-2015, 07:26 PM
Hello, I'm new here as well 
I really, really liked this poem. The rhyme is very good and flows very well. However, I do agree with what jbw1277 said. I would have liked some sort of little reveal at the end. We know that the speaker is in fact a killer themselves and although I think the point was to be playful and coy (despite the morbid subject matter) I'd still like to know a little more.
But honestly, very well done!

I really, really liked this poem. The rhyme is very good and flows very well. However, I do agree with what jbw1277 said. I would have liked some sort of little reveal at the end. We know that the speaker is in fact a killer themselves and although I think the point was to be playful and coy (despite the morbid subject matter) I'd still like to know a little more.
But honestly, very well done!

