Infallible

[buildthestars]

intrinsic
cryptic key
locks seldom fit
elastic 
you bend
I arch, feet
entwined 
bared chest
each beat finite
(enraged 
lost code
BREAK HIS FACE
toxic
they'll boil
KILL THE FAG)
explode
I come
then I fall
infallible <-- these three lines are amazing together
I'm told
not to fear 
Why am I trembling? 
In the darkness
there are hands

Dude, I absolutely love this. I'm not sure if you left out a lot of punctuation intentionally or not, but I'm a huge fan of the fragmented, disjointed flow of pieces like these. However, I would add some punctuation at the end because at the moment it leaves it kind of open.

Honestly, I would add a break before the last two lines, just to give the reader the breath/pause that I feel is naturally there.

The middle seems a bit shaky and I think that's your only weakness here. The flow in is good, the flow out could be perfected.

Awesome poem. Absolutely love it.