Glass Promises

[mkat]

Here's version 2 of the poem, hopefully it's improved some. Any further suggestions are still very much welcome

You are
a singer of polished lies,
with words flowing like a breeze.
You create glass promises,
that
   \
    break
   /
with
   \
    a
   /
single
   \
    breath.

I'm fairly new to poetry, so I apologize if this poem is an extreme mess. I'm intent on improving as much as I can. I think I may have used excessive line breaks, but I'm not sure which ones to remove...  

You are
the ghost in my head,
who whispers words I wish had gone unsaid,
You are
the singer of beautiful lies,
who creates glass promises
as delicate
as gossamer,
    glass
   /
that
   \
    broke
   /
with
   \
    a
   /
single
   \
    breath.

You said
that you were selfish,
I dismissed the notion,
it was a nonexistent blemish
in my mind.
If only I had listened then,
but I had been hopeless
in my love-tinted vision,
and thought of you as divine.

You say that I am what happiness means to you
maybe that was true,
more days than I care to count ago.
But clearly, that meaning wasn’t enough
for
you.

we really expect a bit more than this/mod
I think you could have just stopped it after the first bit. The next couple of stanza's don't really add as much. The first bit is good and my friend likes the visuals. Well done.